Ending Revison of Janitors 4: Strike of the Sweepers


The Founding Witches screamed in Unison, their shriek an awful harpy sound. "Kill!" Belzora yelled "Kill him!" Mr. Clean stepped forward, his deadly rag already twisted into a tight rope. Spencer screamed for Walter to get out of the way. Seconds before the rag hit Walter, Spencer jumped and pushed Walter out of the way, while staying clear of the rag himself. They ran down the hallway and met up with the rest of the Rebel team. Then they headed outside where Bernard was waiting with his garbage truck, Big Bertha. They ride off and try to find another way to defeat the Witches.

Ending Rewrite of Fairest

Ending Rewrite of Fairest

      Right as Aza and Ijori got back to the castle from Gnome Caverns, Aza realized that they were not going to be safe here. The King had gotten better from being ill and had listened as the somewhat evil Queen Ivi had told him many horrors about Aza. She had also managed to turn the King all the way against his nephew, Prince Ijori. Guards surrounded the carriage Aza and Ijori were in and grabbed them harshly. They were lead not to the dungeons, but to a small sitting room in the castle. There they met Queen Ivi, sitting at a glass table with a porcelain tea pot on it. "Ah, the weary travelers have returned." She said with a smirk on her face. "Go on, explain yourselves and have a cup of tea." They sat, each on a fancy chair made of flowery cloth and expensive wood. The tea was a strange color, and reeked of onions and spoiled milk. "If the queen was going to do a good job of poisoning us, she could've disguised the poison better." Aza thought to herself. Before Ijori could take a sip, Aza sang the highest note she could possibly reach with her beautiful voice. The teapot and tea cups shattered into a thousand porcelain pieces. 

     The queen shrieked and angrily got to her feet, her face full of rage, her satin dress stained, and her arms and forehead bleeding from being cut by the broken pieces. As she stood there in shock and disgust, Aza and Ijori ran for the door. "Guards! Guards! Before they get away!" Ivi screamed. Ijori led Aza to a small hallway that lead to the gardens. They ran with all their might and swung into a gigantic tree near the back of the gardens. The guards were right under them. Luckily, it looked as if the tree had been made to climb on, so Aza and Ijori were able to climb to the top and hide in the leaves easily. The guards ran off in different directions yelling, weapons in hand, all going away from the large tree. Relief flooded over the couple, but they did not get down. They were unsure for how long they stayed in that tree but when night fell all seemed quiet at the castle. "There are two things that I must do before we run into the forest, never to return." Ijori whispered to Aza. The first is one that I was saving for the Sing that is coming up, but that I must to do now. Sitting in the high treetops on a thick branch with the moonlight streaming through the leaves around them, Ijori asked Aza to marry him, and Aza was so happy that Ijori had to grab onto her before she fell from the branch. 

     Then, they climbed down from the tall tree and Ijori lead Aza, very quietly, to the stables, just across from the gardens. "This has been my little secret for the past year." Ijori said excitedly. "He walked into a small shed and brought out something red and wiggling. "A dragon!" Aza said, surprised. A loud clatter came from around the stable corner and the two of them jumped. "Uju!" Aza didn't even bother to whisper. She ran to him, happy to see him okay. Uju was a good friend of their's. "Uju, we are in great danger." Ijori said softly. "Can you do something for us?" "Of course! Of course! I knew they were looking for you. I am so glad to see you okay." Uju was a kind fellow.As Ijori wanted, Uju took the small dragon into the castle and snuck it into Queen Ivi's wardrobe. Ijori and Aza took off on a horse from the stable, and rode far, far away, off into the sunrise. They were off to start a new life somewhere, though they didn't quite know where. That morning, Queen Ivi's screams were heard throughout all the lands. Ijori and Aza married and lived happily ever after in a far away land, never to be found by Queen Ivi or her guards, and Queen Ivi lived forever in fear of dragons.  

Ending Revisions, This is what I did

Ending Revision, This is What I Did

I decided to ride my bike down the street to Zyler’s house that night because he had forgot his pillow from our sleep over the night before.  I crawled in through his bedroom window because I didn’t know if his dad would be coming home anytime soon, his dad scares the crap out of me. I set my bike up against the side of the house and used it as a stool to crawl into the window. Zyler wasn’t in his room but I heard his voice coming from the living room. I slowly crept down the hallway, not knowing who was in there talking to with him. I peered out of the hallway and saw Zyler with Cami Wakefield, sitting on the couch. “Logan can be a little bit awkw-” “Don’t you mean great” Zyler tried to talk but i suddenly cut him off, scared of what he might have if he finished his sentence. I don’t know where I got the confidence to stand up for myself, but somehow I did.  “Ohhhh hey Logan” Zyler said anxiously, after all he was just alone with the girl I’ve had a crush on since forever. Suddenly a big “screech” came from outside the the house on the street, “It's my dad! Hurry go and hide!” Zyler quickly pushed me a Cami into his room and locked it tight. But instead of hear the sounds of Zyler’s dad yelling at him, I heard the sounds of Zyler’s dad apologizing to Zyler for all the wrong he’s done. I creeked open the door and saw Zyler hugging his dad.

Ending Revision: The Selection Series: The Heir

The meeting room wasn't always the place you wanted to be in.

My parents sat there looking disappointed.

"We have cancelled the selection. The country is in war and we can not continue." My mom said as I started to argue.

"No! You can't do that! Is that even allowed?" I said freaking out even though the selection this year wasn't super fun for me either.

Right then I knew that I would never have someone to marry. It would just be me. And most of all, my country was falling apart and we can't stop that.

Cancelling the selection would just make our country even more mad and war would continue on forever.

Ending Revision, The Hourglass Door

I curled my fingers around the locket, not wanting to miss these last few moments with Dante. The door was almost closed. Almost gone. There was only a sliver of an opening left, but it was enough for Dante to slip his fingers thought and wrench the door back open. The hinges screamed like a dying creature and I shivered at the unwelcome comparison.

Dante looked back at me. I could see the tears falling down his face. But before the door closed all the way he ran out. I wasn’t really sure how to act, but all I could think about was that Dante wasn’t leaving me. I watched as the door in front of me disappeared. It just vanished. I looked at Dante and he was standing right in front of me.

“How come you didn’t go through the door to stop Zo?” I was looking down at my hands, but I already knew the answer to that question. Dante walked over to me and laced his fingers through mine. I looked deep into his grey, mysterious eyes. “I love you, Abby.”The way he said it made me know that I was his forever and he was mine forever.

Ending Revision, Maniac Magee

     As I was walking back to the Bale's house, I could smell the pumpkin pie cooking from the oven. The streets were filled with laughter while the kids were playing outside. One of them came up to me and asked me to untie it's shoe, and thanked me.

     When I walked into the house, I got embraced by Hester and Lester both grabbing my arms and pulling me toward the kitchen with enthusiasm, their faces lighting up every step closer. When I entered the kitchen, the Bales came up and hugged me. Amanda said, "This is your new home." 

     I knew that I was home.

Blog Assignment: Due APRIL 29th

The Power of the Rewrite!

Your assignment this month is to rewrite the very ending of your favorite novel. Keep it to 3 paragraphs!! Be creative! Remember this is due on April 29th. Have fun and change the world (or at least the ending of your favorite book for our class to read, ha ha). Remember you must do constructive criticism on at least 3 other writer's posts.