Ending Revision to Wonder

     I walked with Summer and Jack. Jack and I could not stop laughing. I heard my dad telling a funny story to everyone. I have never seen my mom laugh so hard.
     As I kept walking along, still laughing, I noticed Summer had been acting strange.
     "What's the matter, Summer?" I asked.
     "Nothing." She replied.
     "There has to be something wrong, you are acting odd." Said Jack.
     "Jack, can you leave me and Auggie alone for a second please?" Summer asked
     "Ya, sure."
     Jack went a head to go and listen to the rest of my dad's story.
     "Auggie," Summer said. "You are the sweetest and most beautiful person I have ever met."
     I stood there awkwardly staring at here.
     "You have been a wonder to me ever since I met you." She said "I feel like I can share anything with you. No wonder you are my closest friend."
     She kissed me on my cheek and walked towards everyone walking in front of us. No one else noticed Summer kissing my cheek. I stood there for a minute still stunned by what just happened.
     Summer and I kept that to ourselves for the rest of the summer. Who knows what  is going to  happen between us next fall, but I guess I will have to wait and see.        
 

Ending Revision of The Sea of Monsters

The girl’s blue eyes stared into mine, and I understood what the Golden Fleece quest had been about. The poisoning of the tree. Everything. Kronos had done it to bring another chess piece into play-another chance to control the prophecy.

Even Chiron, Annabeth, and Grover who should’ve been celebrating this moment, were too shocked, thinking about what it might mean for the future. And I was holding someone who was destined to be my best friend, or possibly my worst enemy.

“I am Thalia,” the girl said. “Daughter of Zeus.”

That's when I woke up panting in my cabin bed. I understood what the dream meant, I ran up to the hill to remove the fleece. As soon as I got there I removed the fleece while ignoring all of Annabeth’s questions. I had done it, no Thalia.

Rewritten Ending for Phantoms in the Snow

          Hiking up the huge Italian mountain was hard, and of course, very cold.  Even though replacing Skeeter as the leader of the group was difficult, Noah knew he had done the right thing.  As the the group neared the last few feet of the climb up to the top, every single member of the group imagined the things that they would stumble upon.  Noah readied his rifle and heaved himself up to the edge of the cliff.

          Noah looked around the clearing near the top of the mountain, and was surprised to find that the battalion of German soldiers had already been rounded up and taken as prisoners.  He continued to scan the area, and found the group that included his uncle had been the one to make it to the top first.  His uncle had a shocked expression on his face as he realized that Skeeter had not even come on the mission, and Noah had taken his place.

          The two groups slowly approached each other, then began congratulating each other on the successful climb of Riva Ridge.  Noah started walking towards his uncle, but out of the corner of his eye, he saw one of the younger German soldiers pull out a weapon that had not been been confiscated yet.  The barrel, which would deliver a fatal payload, was pointed directly at Noah's uncle.  Noah knew what he needed to do.  Using all the strength he had left in his thin frame, he threw himself directly into the path of the bullet.  Just as quickly as the gun was drawn, Noah was face down, dying in the snow.  As his vision faded, he saw his mother and father, and then blackness.

Return of the king rewrite

     As Shelob bounded toward Frodo, Sam gasped as he glimpsed his master being cast to the ground. But then, a slimy, but a surprisingly strong hand reached up and griped his neck. while the other hand shot out and grabbed his wrist, and slowly and relentlessly, bending his wrist forward, until, with a cry, Sam dropped the sword. So, then Sam played his last trick, with all his strength he pulled away and got feet firmly planted; then suddenly, he drove his legs against the ground and with his whole force hurled himself backwards. Not expecting this simple trick from Sam, Gollum fell over Sam, received all of Sam's force on his stomach. With a hiss of pain, Gollum loosened his grip, in which Sam wrenched himself away, and spun, whirling the Faramir's staff, and connected it solidly with Gollum's arm joint. Shrieking in pain, Gollum leaped angrily at Sam only only to be rebuked roughly by the sturdy staff striking the top of his skull. The wretched creature then staggered off drunkenly. But Sam paid no heed. He rushed of to save his master, with the shadow of a doubt swirling around that his master may have already perished. He reached Frodo, not paying any attention to where Shelob the gargantuan spider had crept of to. Weeping profusely, he realized he had forgotten the sword. As he hurried back to acquire the sword he remembered the threat of the spider. Seizing the sword he spun around, only to see the beast creeping down the side of a small cliff. Roaring in anger, he cried 'Now come you filth! You have hurt my master, you brute and you'll pay for it! We're going on, but not until I'm finished with You!' With this he rushed toward the monster, and drove the elf forged sword into Shelob's head. With a howl of pain, the Spider retreated only to jump forward and be stabbed through the stomach and out through the back! A thin tearing howl began to be emitted from Shelob. This alarmed Sam, seeing as they were in the midst of Sauron's land. Yanking the Sword out, he threw his gaze about, hoping that no orcs were alarmed by this cry. Looking back to where Shelob had previously been before, he saw that she had scuttled off, and now lay near the entrance of her lair, Dead. Now returning back to Frodo, he sob as the reality of what had happened sunk in. Soon realizing that he had to face the facts, he gathered things that would be of use on his lonesome journey. Slipping into the mithril coat, he marveled at how light something of such great power could be. Now the question of the ring. Sam knew how great a burden the thing could be, and thought of many possible ways to bring about the task he was set to complete. Suddenly hearing the fearsome cry of the Nazgul, after lifting Frodo into a crack, Sam wriggled into one himself. Lookin up he saw the great beast circling, calling on the power of the ring. Being struck with a sudden, foolish and absurd idea, Sam began climbing to the top of the small crevice he was hidden in. Reaching the top, sam peered over the side of the crevice at the Nazgul and the rider that had just perched itself atop the crevice that Frodo was hidden in. Seeming to smell him out, the Nazgul began digging it’s long hooked claws into the ground trying to seize Frodo. Luckily for sam, he had already collected all the materials and supplies for the long journey, but unfortunately, the wind blowing against Sam's back blew the his scent to the Nazgul. Realizing this a split second before his foes did, he maneuvered into a better position, than he rushed at his enemies. The rider, being one of the nine immediately sensed the power of the ring drawing near, whipped his head and over to where Sam was speedily approaching. Sam’s blood ran cold as the dark hood encloaked with flowing robes seemed to glare at him. A shrieking cry, emitted from The rider the Nazgul or Sam himself bounced around the rocky segment of land. Although Sam had surprise on his side, the Rider, being part of the nine, was extremely well trained with a sword, but Sam had thrown him off balance with weight and force Sam had impacted him with. Pushing as hard as his small frame would allow, he noticed the Nazgul preparing to jump into the air and take flight. Pushing desperately to get to firm ground on the Nazgul back as it leaped into the air. Unbalanced the rider plunged of the Nazgul and fell with a cry that rose the hairs on any living thing in all the land. But as the one of the nine hit the ground only a small black hood was all that remained. Gathering the huge reins up in his hand, Sam learned to fly the dragon like creature with an intimate sense that only the one that had trained and taken care of bill had. Snarling and screaming, the beast tossed and turned it’s head, not at all pleased with the attempts that it’s knew rider was doing at taming it. Once again seeing the mountain peak where he was headed not to far in the distance, Sam fell into a sitting position, and was quite unconscious of anything for quite a while for he was trying to absorb the terror and excitement that he had just gone through.

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    Then as the darkness closed again there was a sound rolling across the fields with a great boom at that sound the bent shape of the king sprang forward, suddenly erect. Tall and proud he seemed rising in his stirrups he cried with a loud voice saying

Arise, arise Riders of Theoden!

Fell deeds awake: fire and slaughter!

Spear shall be broken, shield shall be splintered

A sword-day, a red day, ere the sun rises!

Ride now! Ride to gondor!

With that he seized a great horn from Guthlaf his banner bearer, and blew such a great blast that it burst asunder. And straight away all the horns in the host were lifted up in music, and the blowing of the horns of Rohan in that hour was like a storm upon the plain and a thunder in the mountains.

Ride now, ride now! Ride to Gondor!

Suddenly the king cried to Snowmane and the horse sprang away. Behind him his banner blew in the wind, white upon the field of green, overtaking the host of mordor, and then suddenly there was Eomer riding near him, but none could overtake Theoden, and the armies of Mordor wailed and gnashed their teeth. As just as Dernhelm and Merry rode into battle a felling foes, a the dreaded shadow of a Nazgul past over them bringing terror and fear with it. Windfola bolted in fright, and When Merry looked up, dazed he saw Dernhelm standing alone facing the nazgul and the rider. He spoke in some other voice he had known, and he said “Begone! Thou dwimmerlaik! Leave the dead alone!”  and a cold voice answered “come not between a Nazgul and his prey! Or he will slay thee in thy turn” A sword rang as it was drawn “do what you will but I will hinder it if i may” ‘Hinder me! Thou fool no living man may hinder me!’ For then merry heard a laugh, which belong to Dernhelm who said ‘But no living man am I! You look upon a woman, Eowyn Eomunds daughter I am,’ Then at that moment three things happened. The Nazgul lept at Eowyn, and Merry lept at the Ringwraith, while the Seemed “dead” Theoden shot an arrow, at the Ringwraith as well. This arrow was driven through the Ringwraiths heart while at the same time Eowyn Sliced off the Nazguls head, and drove her sword into the opening of the ringwraiths helmet, While merry stabbed him in the stomach. And the Ringwraith fell and died, and only a black cloak remained. While Merry and Eowyn rushed Theoden to the house of healing after the event of being crushed by horse Soldiers began crying through the land, ‘Oliphants! Oliphants and Boats from mordor!’ When these rumors reached their peak, the boats ran aground, and the Oliphants crashed into the remaining rather feeble army. But no enemies jumped out of the boat, only three figures, soon to be identified as Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli. Hope rose, as the small army noticed ally’s leaping of the boats. But then dwindled as it became apparent that there were only three on the boat. Then, Suddenly, thousands of undead warriors appeared, glowing ghostly, defeating Oliphaunts and the enemy forces that had rammed against the last stand of gondor. Every person fighting for their home, and their families and freedom from Sauron's rule. Allied with the undead warriors, Legolas and gimli's game could continue, as Gimli cut down the forces of mordor, Legolas deftly jumped and climbed up and Oliphaunt and quickly unbalanced and sent the tower atop it crashing to the ground. Then Striking the beast with three arrows in the head.  As he swiftly and gracefully from the Oliphaunts trunk to the ground, Gimli said gruffly, ‘That still only counts as one!’ Soon though, the battle was won, and Aragorn dismissed the undead warriors, and then they rushed of to the land of mordor, where when they were encountered by the black gate, Aragorn sent swift climbers Over the sides to open the gate for others to follow through, and soon enough, the army was soon marching through. Immediately after they had entered into mordor, Gandalf looked toward the mountain of fire, and despaired to see the dreadful shape of a nazgul slowly circling and landing near the entrance of the end of Frodo and Sam’s quest. But soon enough they had there own problems to deal with, for a host of mordor had not been idle in the time that the army was spotted at the top of the black gate. Quickly taking charge, Aragorn made a small wedge of his army, and attempted to push through the army of mordor.

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    As Sam alight next to the entrance of the mountain of fire, the despair that he had felt while riding the Nazgul was gone, he knew what he was to do and how to do it. He must complete the quest, but looking out over mordor, he spotted two armies contending warmly, and one gleamed with light, while the other was dark in shadow. Hastening to the center of the mountain of fire, He felt a familiar chill come over him. Without even looking back, he knew that the other Ringwraiths had come to stop him, and take the ring and its power back to their master. Thinking of the pros and cons of putting on the ring and fully drawing its power, or destroying it once and for all, or both. Soon looking back, he noticed the end, also the drop to the fire below just a few feet away, pulling out the ring, Sam placed it upon his finger, in the distance, he heard a shrieking roar from the eye of sauron whipped toward him, and the fear of the ring being destroyed. But then, a small pulse drew his attention back to the ring upon his finger. Slowly, and using great caution, Sam began to tap to some of the ring’s great power, he felt a new and powerful feeling slowly crawling through him. Quite quickly it filled him, and then, he knew that he had to get rid of the power, or it would destroy him as it did to Gollum. Looking back to the Ringwraiths he saw the terrible white king that Frodo had described yelling in anger, fear, and annoyance, and mostly weariness, Sam expelled all of the energy that had been housed inside of him. It was almost as if Gandalf's fireworks had exploded with one hundred times the force, and intensity, and directed to choice points. The Ringwraiths were blown up nearly back to sauron’s tower, and then the most curious thing happened, as Aragorn and Gandalf and both armies alike turned and looked back at mordor and the mountain of doom, the mountain seemed to exploded itself, and when it did, the eye and the tower of mordor collapsed, and mordor became one giant sinkhole. And this sinkhole, after swallowing the black gate and much of the army of mordor, stopped neatly around the army of Gondor and Rohan alike.

    Now as Sam released this power, he knew how much damage and destruction it would cause,  Hurrying out of the mountain, he found a battered Nazgul nearly crushed under a rock, drawing more power from the ring, Sam crushed this rock, and then realized that he still had the ring, and had just used it to save a monstrous beast. ‘SamWise Gamgee, thou brick head!’ he muttered, and with that, he turned dashed back to the cracks of doom and cast the ring into the fire below, returning outside, he jumped atop the Nazgul and raced seething fire and sinkholes back to where he had left Frodo. Returning to the place, he was stunned to look into the small crevice and see Frodo stirring, Then a weak cry from the depths of mordor sounded, and the Nazgul attempted to take flight, and it arose through the smoke, and that is the last anyone has seen of that fearsome Nazgul. Helping a groggy frodo out of the crevice, Sam looked around desperately for anyway to escape from mordor. Then hearing a piercing cry, quite different from the ones of Ringwraiths and Nazguls Sam looked up, and his jaw dropped in wonder, there were magnificent eagles, and one of them, bearing Gandalf upon his back, picked up Frodo in one claw and Sam in the other. Now feeling great peace, Sam fell into a deep sleep, and returned to Gondor with Frodo to see Aragorn crowned king, and many other adventures took place, but unfortunately, this is a extremely long blog post, and I’m pretty sure no one will read it. And They all lived happily ever after.

Editing Revision of QB1

Now came the day when is would be time for Jake Cullen to make the decision of which college he would be attending. Jake was at his high school sitting at a table with the hats of the following teams; Texas A&M, LSU, Auburn, and Ole Miss. Today would be one of the biggest days of Jake’s life deciding which college to go to.

Finally, everyone had finally arrived and had been seated in their seats to see which college Jake would attend. Sitting next to Jake would be his mom, dad,brother, and his coach. Once everyone was quite Jake would reach for the hat of the college he will go to. First, he put his hand over the Auburn hat, then shifted to the LSU one, then the Texas A&M one. After that he went to the Ole Miss hat and finally he went back to the Texas A&M hat then picked it up and put it on.Jake would now be attending Texas A&M to play football as the quater-back.

Ending Revision to The Boy in the Striped Pajamas

        Mother did not return to Berlin quite as quickly as she had hoped. She stayed at Out-With for several months waiting for news of Bruno, until one day, quite suddenly, she thought he might have made his way home alone, so she immediately returned to their old house, half expecting to see him sitting on the doorstep waiting for her.

        He wasn't there, of course. 

        Gretel returned to Berlin with Mother and spent a lot of time alone in her room crying, not because she had thrown her dolls away and not because she had left all her maps behind at Out-With, but because she missed Bruno so much. 

        Father stayed at Out-With for another year after Bruno's death and became disliked by all of the soldiers. Through all that time, there wasn't a second when Bruno wasn't on his mind. He fell asleep thinking of him and woke up thinking of him too. He often thought of all the times Bruno complained of Out-With, wondering, had he listened, would Bruno be there? 

        Father could recall many times when Bruno had tried talking to him and he ignored him without a care in the world. Now he would do anything to hear his voice. Even some days he could swear he heard Bruno laughing or racing around the halls. He would even call out Bruno's name to see if he would answer. 

        But of course, Bruno never did. 

        A lot of times, Father found himself doing exactly what Gretel and Mother were doing, grieving. Father never returned home to Berlin, simply because Gretel and Mother reminded him of Bruno. And to think of Bruno caused him pain. Everyone in his family would always have a little piece of Bruno left in them. But perhaps, life would be better if everyone had a little bit of Bruno in them. 

        

Ending Revision of Inheritance

        Farewell, Eragon Shadeslayer.

       And then Fírnen swept down from above and snatched her off the deck of the ship, buffeting Eragon with with the gusts of air from his wings.

        Then, Eragon smiled, for he knew he left the fate of the Riders in good hands. Above, Saphira wept silently, knowing they had done what was necessary, but sad to leave everything that she had ever known behind. As the ship sailed into the unknown, Eragon consoled Saphira, and she watched with him as they sailed down the moonlit river into the dark lands beyond.

Ending revision to The Burning Bridge

As Will finally got the flames to ignite again, he saw 6 skandian mercenaries charging him and the unconscious Evanlyn.  He pulled out his recurve bow and shot arrows until he saw all the skandians were laying on the ground dead or hiding behind rocks.  He looked across the bridge and saw he had ruined his only chance of escape.  He himself could make it but, never while carrying Evanlyn across with him. He was just turning around win he felt himself slipping into unconsciousness has a stone slammed into the back of his head. As he started to drift away he felt rough hands stick his body in a burlap sack and carry him away.

Ending Revision, Keeper of the Lost Cities, Exile

“Whoa, Foster,  are you crying?” Keefe asked, as she blushes and tries to smear away the tears.  “Sorry, I really don’t know what’s wrong with me” she states.

  “I know what’s wrong with you,” Dex says taking her hand, while Keefe

takes the other and Fitz and Biana each set a hand on her shoulders  “Absolutely nothing.”

And for the first time in a long, long time, Sophie finally felt safe, and happy

as she said, “I think you might be right, Dex”

Ending Revision, Mrs. Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children

There were a two rowboats on the sides of the one Emma, Hugh, and I were in. I looked to the boat on my right and saw Brownyn smiling and holding Mrs. Peregrine's camera in the air. I smiled back at her. We had decided earlier to start a new camera roll and leave the old photos at the orphanage. Maybe one day I could have my own pile of old photos - containing memories of my childhood - as well as wonderful stories to share with my family. 

Brownyn put her camera down and lifted her other arm, pointing at something behind me. I turned around and saw black silhouettes of battleships progressing on the horizon.

We rowed faster.

The real ending for The Giver

Jones held Gabriel close to him, he tried the best he could to shelter the infant from the cold. He looked up at the mountain towering ahead of him, the little sunlight that there was reflecting on the snow, creating a thousand diamonds that sparkled and shimmered in the light. It created a blinding effect that made his situation a whole lot worse.

Just this mountain Jones thought after this mountain I should be good, but if there is just blank space beyond this mountain then… no, he couldn’t think of it that way. He looked down at Gabriel, the little baby’s lips where a purple-blue, like his fingers. He had to make it through the storm, had to keep Gabriel alive, and the only way to do both of those things was to go up the mountain.

Jones started up, taking in deep breathes that froze his lungs. He stumbled a little and fell, but he got back up, he had to. Jones compared how far he had gone to how far he had to go, a third of the way there, maybe. He kept on going, trying his hardest to keep Gabriel alive. In what seemed to Jonas like forever, he finally reached the top of the mountain and fell, he fell for eternity falling into abyss Finally his head touched the soft padding of snow, he loved the way it felt, laying down he didn’t need to worry about climbing up the hill. He thought he could rest there forever but then he heard a sound. He looked down and saw Gabriel crying, the tears freezing into ice of his face and that just made him cry more. Jones hugged him tightly and used all of the memory of sun he could get and transferred it into the baby. He looked down and actually thought he could see Gabriel smile a little. That's when Jones looked down the hill and he saw a house with something rising out of it, he couldn’t think of what it was exactly, but searching his memories he thought it might be smoke, or steam, he couldn’t tell for sure, though.

Then he looked down some more and saw it, a sled, its silver runners gleaming in the radiant sun. Jones picked up the rope, got on the sled, and used his feet to push off. Holding the rope with one hand and carrying gabriel with the other made it hard to have control over the sled, although using his memory of how he had done it before made it possible. After an exhilarating three minutes of straight downhill his ride came to a stop, he stood up, he was about five yards away from the house. He started toward it  yet on the porch he stopped, he didn’t know what to do next, the Giver hadn’t given him any memories on how to summon the residents of the house. Back home he would have pressed the button by the door and that would call whoever was inside, yet this house didn’t have a button. So he decided to say hello, and as soon as he did a woman appeared at the door, she looked at Gabriel and then at Jones, and before he could speak she let him inside. Inside there were children unwrapping boxes and as soon as they tore them open they would gasp at what was inside. Jones listened to the laughter, felt the atmosphere of the place and came up with the word from a memory the Giver had given him, a word that described the whole situation it one syllable-love.

Harry Potter: The Deathly Hallows

    And with that, Harry awoke in his bed under the stairs. No. This could not be a dream. He thought to himself how immense all of it was. There was no way possible that he could dream several years of experiences at Hogwarts and other locations. he looked to his night stand and saw CD, next to a TV. he did what any curious wizard would do and put the shiny object into the DVD player. As he hit play, Hermione's face appeared on the screen. She started speaking as if she was there. Could this be a new form of communication?

     She then said," Harry, your probably wondering how you got back to your bed under the stairs. Your probably also wondering how I know this information. But what you do not know is that in your most previous battle with Voldemort, you were struck in the head. He cast upon you a spell that can only be broke by killing yourself. The spell makes it so you can only remember the events that happened before the spell was cast. So yes, it all really did happen. And the bed your lying on right now is actually a replica of your previous one. Me, you, Ron, and some other people have gone into hiding.Voldemort is still alive and is attempting to find us. I cannot be certain that you will see us when you step out of your door, but your wand is mostly likely under your bed. Sincerely, Hermione."

        Harry's mind was so struck he could barely comprehend what was happening. And why did she speak so quickly? Why was there so little information shared in the message? And if this was a replica of his former bedroom,where was he? Harry then stood,picked his bed up, and there sat his wand. He proceeded to pick it up and set outside. What he saw as he exited his bedroom was so devastating and sad he considered going back into his bedroom. For he sat upon a single island of ground. He was not on an island in the sea, but surrounded by a vast expanse of fire and devastation. Off in the distance, he saw what he thought to be a castle. But it did not sit on ground. In fact, Harry was perched upon a single cylinder like piece of ground. There were no stairs or slides to get down. So then, Harry set of to try to reach the hovering castle.

The Rewritten Ending of The Tale of Despereaux

    “What did you say your name was,” the king asked. “His name is Despereaux,” the Pea said before Despereaux had a chance to speak. “Well, Despereaux, for you courage in saving my daughter, all mice are now welcome in my castle.” Antoinette gasped in surprise as she had been eavesdropping on the conversation.

    “Also,” the king said,”as I talked about your courage and bravery Despereaux, I grant you with the privilege of eating soup. In fact, I will now allow the entire kingdom to eat soup as they please.” The Princess Pea then spoke up, “Father, can we have a soup feast with all of the kingdom in honor of Despereaux?” “Yes, let us have a feast with all of the kingdom for the mouse and Despereaux, invite all of the mice you can find to the feast. Let the servants start preparing and someone tell Cook that we are going to be needing a lot of soup within the next few hours.”

    The Pea then got a tap on the shoulder and saw that Despereaux was standing there. “Thank you so much for suggesting the feast. I never thought I would tell you this but, I love you.”

Rewrite of the End of Diary of a Wimpy Kid

            Instead of trying to be in the yearbook as Class Clown I've decided that I would rather be chosen for most likely to succeed. In order to do that I need to beat Jenna Stewart which will be hard because she is super smart and clever and she can beat me at anything. I've decided that I also need to wear nice clothes to look presentable to my peers. 

           The reason I chose most likely to succeed is that I know that Rowley is a shoe-in for Class Clown. and if he doesn't win he will be mad at me.
            After the yearbook was published on the last day of school me and Rowley raced to go buy one. I flipped to the Most Likely To... page and found my name, but it wasn't where I suspected.  Me and Rowley were both chosen to be Class Clowns. Rowley was so happy that he came up to me and gave me a  big hug. No Wonder he and I were picked Class Clown.

Ending revision, Diary of a Wimpey Kid #1

     I flipped, through the pages of the school year book. So what if rowley did get the award class clown. All I can say is that I have a free year book if you want one?  But if rowley gets to famous I'll tell people that he ate the cheese and that'll bring him down a few notches. And the worst part is that I can't sulke at rowleies because it's so easy to bet him at video games.

Ending Revision, Kingdom Keepers Power Play

As Finn pushed the button to return home, he heard a faint scream.  When he returned home, he texted all the other keepers to see if they heard it to. They all answered immediately saying they did. The next day at school, all they could think about was who the scream might have came from. Half way through the day, Finn gets a text from Jess saying they need to meet up ASAP after school. When school is finally over, Finn meets Jess at the nearby smoothie shop. They sit down and Jess has a scared look on her face and Finn knows something bad is going on. Jess tells him that Amanda never came back last night. She believes the scream everyone heard came from Amanda. As she continues to explain, she suddenly stops and pulls out her journel and pen and immediately starts drawing. Finn knows what is happening though, Jess is having another vision. As he watches her draw, he gets the chills and knows that tonight is going to be long and dangerous, but they must find Amanda.

Ending Revison of Janitors 4: Strike of the Sweepers


The Founding Witches screamed in Unison, their shriek an awful harpy sound. "Kill!" Belzora yelled "Kill him!" Mr. Clean stepped forward, his deadly rag already twisted into a tight rope. Spencer screamed for Walter to get out of the way. Seconds before the rag hit Walter, Spencer jumped and pushed Walter out of the way, while staying clear of the rag himself. They ran down the hallway and met up with the rest of the Rebel team. Then they headed outside where Bernard was waiting with his garbage truck, Big Bertha. They ride off and try to find another way to defeat the Witches.

Ending Rewrite of Fairest

Ending Rewrite of Fairest

      Right as Aza and Ijori got back to the castle from Gnome Caverns, Aza realized that they were not going to be safe here. The King had gotten better from being ill and had listened as the somewhat evil Queen Ivi had told him many horrors about Aza. She had also managed to turn the King all the way against his nephew, Prince Ijori. Guards surrounded the carriage Aza and Ijori were in and grabbed them harshly. They were lead not to the dungeons, but to a small sitting room in the castle. There they met Queen Ivi, sitting at a glass table with a porcelain tea pot on it. "Ah, the weary travelers have returned." She said with a smirk on her face. "Go on, explain yourselves and have a cup of tea." They sat, each on a fancy chair made of flowery cloth and expensive wood. The tea was a strange color, and reeked of onions and spoiled milk. "If the queen was going to do a good job of poisoning us, she could've disguised the poison better." Aza thought to herself. Before Ijori could take a sip, Aza sang the highest note she could possibly reach with her beautiful voice. The teapot and tea cups shattered into a thousand porcelain pieces. 

     The queen shrieked and angrily got to her feet, her face full of rage, her satin dress stained, and her arms and forehead bleeding from being cut by the broken pieces. As she stood there in shock and disgust, Aza and Ijori ran for the door. "Guards! Guards! Before they get away!" Ivi screamed. Ijori led Aza to a small hallway that lead to the gardens. They ran with all their might and swung into a gigantic tree near the back of the gardens. The guards were right under them. Luckily, it looked as if the tree had been made to climb on, so Aza and Ijori were able to climb to the top and hide in the leaves easily. The guards ran off in different directions yelling, weapons in hand, all going away from the large tree. Relief flooded over the couple, but they did not get down. They were unsure for how long they stayed in that tree but when night fell all seemed quiet at the castle. "There are two things that I must do before we run into the forest, never to return." Ijori whispered to Aza. The first is one that I was saving for the Sing that is coming up, but that I must to do now. Sitting in the high treetops on a thick branch with the moonlight streaming through the leaves around them, Ijori asked Aza to marry him, and Aza was so happy that Ijori had to grab onto her before she fell from the branch. 

     Then, they climbed down from the tall tree and Ijori lead Aza, very quietly, to the stables, just across from the gardens. "This has been my little secret for the past year." Ijori said excitedly. "He walked into a small shed and brought out something red and wiggling. "A dragon!" Aza said, surprised. A loud clatter came from around the stable corner and the two of them jumped. "Uju!" Aza didn't even bother to whisper. She ran to him, happy to see him okay. Uju was a good friend of their's. "Uju, we are in great danger." Ijori said softly. "Can you do something for us?" "Of course! Of course! I knew they were looking for you. I am so glad to see you okay." Uju was a kind fellow.As Ijori wanted, Uju took the small dragon into the castle and snuck it into Queen Ivi's wardrobe. Ijori and Aza took off on a horse from the stable, and rode far, far away, off into the sunrise. They were off to start a new life somewhere, though they didn't quite know where. That morning, Queen Ivi's screams were heard throughout all the lands. Ijori and Aza married and lived happily ever after in a far away land, never to be found by Queen Ivi or her guards, and Queen Ivi lived forever in fear of dragons.  

Ending Revisions, This is what I did

Ending Revision, This is What I Did

I decided to ride my bike down the street to Zyler’s house that night because he had forgot his pillow from our sleep over the night before.  I crawled in through his bedroom window because I didn’t know if his dad would be coming home anytime soon, his dad scares the crap out of me. I set my bike up against the side of the house and used it as a stool to crawl into the window. Zyler wasn’t in his room but I heard his voice coming from the living room. I slowly crept down the hallway, not knowing who was in there talking to with him. I peered out of the hallway and saw Zyler with Cami Wakefield, sitting on the couch. “Logan can be a little bit awkw-” “Don’t you mean great” Zyler tried to talk but i suddenly cut him off, scared of what he might have if he finished his sentence. I don’t know where I got the confidence to stand up for myself, but somehow I did.  “Ohhhh hey Logan” Zyler said anxiously, after all he was just alone with the girl I’ve had a crush on since forever. Suddenly a big “screech” came from outside the the house on the street, “It's my dad! Hurry go and hide!” Zyler quickly pushed me a Cami into his room and locked it tight. But instead of hear the sounds of Zyler’s dad yelling at him, I heard the sounds of Zyler’s dad apologizing to Zyler for all the wrong he’s done. I creeked open the door and saw Zyler hugging his dad.

Ending Revision: The Selection Series: The Heir

The meeting room wasn't always the place you wanted to be in.

My parents sat there looking disappointed.

"We have cancelled the selection. The country is in war and we can not continue." My mom said as I started to argue.

"No! You can't do that! Is that even allowed?" I said freaking out even though the selection this year wasn't super fun for me either.

Right then I knew that I would never have someone to marry. It would just be me. And most of all, my country was falling apart and we can't stop that.

Cancelling the selection would just make our country even more mad and war would continue on forever.

Ending Revision, The Hourglass Door

I curled my fingers around the locket, not wanting to miss these last few moments with Dante. The door was almost closed. Almost gone. There was only a sliver of an opening left, but it was enough for Dante to slip his fingers thought and wrench the door back open. The hinges screamed like a dying creature and I shivered at the unwelcome comparison.

Dante looked back at me. I could see the tears falling down his face. But before the door closed all the way he ran out. I wasn’t really sure how to act, but all I could think about was that Dante wasn’t leaving me. I watched as the door in front of me disappeared. It just vanished. I looked at Dante and he was standing right in front of me.

“How come you didn’t go through the door to stop Zo?” I was looking down at my hands, but I already knew the answer to that question. Dante walked over to me and laced his fingers through mine. I looked deep into his grey, mysterious eyes. “I love you, Abby.”The way he said it made me know that I was his forever and he was mine forever.

Ending Revision, Maniac Magee

     As I was walking back to the Bale's house, I could smell the pumpkin pie cooking from the oven. The streets were filled with laughter while the kids were playing outside. One of them came up to me and asked me to untie it's shoe, and thanked me.

     When I walked into the house, I got embraced by Hester and Lester both grabbing my arms and pulling me toward the kitchen with enthusiasm, their faces lighting up every step closer. When I entered the kitchen, the Bales came up and hugged me. Amanda said, "This is your new home." 

     I knew that I was home.

Blog Assignment: Due APRIL 29th

The Power of the Rewrite!

Your assignment this month is to rewrite the very ending of your favorite novel. Keep it to 3 paragraphs!! Be creative! Remember this is due on April 29th. Have fun and change the world (or at least the ending of your favorite book for our class to read, ha ha). Remember you must do constructive criticism on at least 3 other writer's posts.