Get Your Homework In
People these days need to get there work done. In Mrs. Harris class theirs always people that don't have there reading done. Same with science it always seems that people don't have there flashcards done. Teachers hate that it's time to stop and get your work in. I'm not saying that i'm perfect, but at least have your work in done. That's for me and the whole school because we all do it.
Good job. To improve, you could use the words there and their correctly.
ReplyDeleteGood job. To improve, you could use the words there and their correctly.
ReplyDeleteNice work, what do you think it would sound like if you talked more about you and not other people.
ReplyDeleteGood job, I think everyone has trouble with turning in papers and stuff. what would it look like if you added correct spelling?
ReplyDeleteGood job, I think everyone has trouble with turning in papers and stuff. what would it look like if you added correct spelling?
ReplyDeleteI thought it was great, however, knowing you I think there are quite a lot of adjustments and improvements that can be made. I think it would be a lot easier for you to convey your thoughts if it was longer.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was pretty good, but that there were somethings that could be added to it. How would it look with more description and detail?
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really liked how you said that teachers don't like it when we turn in work late. What would it look like if it was more descriptive?
ReplyDeleteIt was good. What if you didn't talk about everyone else's shortcomings and more about what you can not do to be better?
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