“Whoa, Foster, are you crying?” Keefe asked, as she blushes and tries to smear away the tears. “Sorry, I really don’t know what’s wrong with me” she states.
“I know what’s wrong with you,” Dex says taking her hand, while Keefe
takes the other and Fitz and Biana each set a hand on her shoulders “Absolutely nothing.”
And for the first time in a long, long time, Sophie finally felt safe, and happy
as she said, “I think you might be right, Dex”
Wow! Great job. What if you added more description? Great job overall though.
ReplyDeleteWow! Great job. What if you added more description? Great job overall though.
ReplyDeleteGood job! What would it look like if you made it a little longer? Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! What do you think it would look like if it had a little bit more detail? Over all, awesome!
ReplyDeleteGreat start but add more so we have a better picture of the situation in the plot. Well done!
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