I walked with Summer and Jack. Jack and I could not stop laughing. I heard my dad telling a funny story to everyone. I have never seen my mom laugh so hard.
As I kept walking along, still laughing, I noticed Summer had been acting strange.
"What's the matter, Summer?" I asked.
"Nothing." She replied.
"There has to be something wrong, you are acting odd." Said Jack.
"Jack, can you leave me and Auggie alone for a second please?" Summer asked
"Ya, sure."
Jack went a head to go and listen to the rest of my dad's story.
"Auggie," Summer said. "You are the sweetest and most beautiful person I have ever met."
I stood there awkwardly staring at here.
"You have been a wonder to me ever since I met you." She said "I feel like I can share anything with you. No wonder you are my closest friend."
She kissed me on my cheek and walked towards everyone walking in front of us. No one else noticed Summer kissing my cheek. I stood there for a minute still stunned by what just happened.
Summer and I kept that to ourselves for the rest of the summer. Who knows what is going to happen between us next fall, but I guess I will have to wait and see.
That was such a good ending! I haven't read the book yet, but if the writing was this good, I totally would! What would it sound like if you added a little more description into the scene, like where they are? That was still amazing! ;)
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ReplyDeleteGreat job! That was an amazing ending! What if you put more description in it? I liked the way you put a twist in the ending!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome! That was a great new ending. How would it look if you added comas for longer sentences? That was a sweet ending!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Job! I loved how it looked so professional! What do you think it would look like with a little bit more details on where they are? I loved it!
ReplyDeleteI love your story! I loved Wonder when I read it, and this ending is perfect! What would your story look like if you made your paragraphs a little bit longer! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love wonder but this, I must say was also excellent. The formatting was a little hard to follow but in the end it was still a great piece and you should be proud.
ReplyDeleteThis warmed my heart because I love Wonder and I love the idea of maybe Auggie and Summer having something in the future. Really solid writing: great job!
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