Thursday, November 19, 2015

Best Thanksgiving food(Revised)

          I think that the best thanksgiving food is turkey. I think that turkey is the best because it is traditional. One of the main reasons that I chose this was because it was at the original feast I think that when anyone thinks about thanksgiving they think of turkey. Although according to  toptenofcity.com turkey is actually the tenth most eat food of Thanksgiving, being beat out for ninth by baked macaroni and cheese. So its not the most popular if I had to choose one it would be turkey.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 23, 2015 at 1:29 PM

    I liked your story. I thought it was good how you clearly stated in your first sentence what your opinion was. How do you think it would sound if you got some facts to give support to your opinion?

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  2. AnonymousNovember 23, 2015 at 2:04 PM

    I really enjoyed the description that you used throughout the paragraph. What would your writing look like if you focused completely on one topic, either the turkey or pumpkin pie?

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  3. Mrs.RobinsNovember 27, 2015 at 8:24 PM

    Hi Brodie, Double-check instructions, revise and repost. Please send me an email so I can look at it again and up your grade. You need evidence to back up your opinion. Thanks!

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