Sunday, November 1, 2015

This Pumpkin Will EAT You

      "There," said my Dad, as he handed me our jack-o-lantern. "Just set it on the porch." So I set the jack-o-lantern on the porch and went inside, little did I know that would be keeping us from trick-or-treating that night.
        It all started when I heard screaming outside. "What's that noise?" my sister asked-that a amazing considering that she had her earbuds in and her music was cranked up to the maximum volume. "I don't know maybe it's the pizza guy." I said teasing her. "That's a pretty loud pizza guy." she said teasing back.
        "Go open the door."my sister said. "Okay?" I said questioning her so I went to open the door when my Mom called me upstairs "What mom?" I said " Oh, um you need to go clean your room." she said angry "Ok, Geez." I said back "Hey, sis mom's making me clean my room I'll be down in a minute." I said there was no reply so I go clean my room and head back downstairs and the door was wide open and my sister was gone, knowing her, she almost never moves from her spot ever. " Then in that split second I hear a yelping and I see the pumpkin and my sister's hand. Then everything went black.

2 comments:

  1. Wow I really like the story but maybe it could use more description and rising action

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  2. Wow I really like the story but maybe it could use more description and rising action

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