Tuesday, December 8, 2015

 December post

     The black cat twitched its tail twice. It hissed. Then, all of the sudden a witch came from around the corner, scooped up the cat, and flew away. That's when I knew it would be a crazy Halloween night. While I walked past the old White's Mansion, I saw a figure in the window.  It looked liked the person was petting a cat and that person had a weird hat on. When I got home after trick or treating I had a lot of candy, but all I could think about was that mysterious figure. So, I decided that I would go and check it out. When I got to the old White's Mansion the lights were on, and they haven't been on in ages. I approached the door, it was closed, but right when I reached out for the door it creaked open. Then, I walked inside. I noticed two things, that the house was covered in green spider webs, and that there was a light coming from upstairs making the room glow. When I went upstairs every single step creaked. As I got closer and closer to the top I began to feel more and more nervous. Finally, I reached the top. I went into a room and in the center was the witch and she was brewing something in her cauldron. I got closer, and noticed she was putting a gummy worm in her cauldron.  Then she said,"Those who come here don't return, boy, without dancing." She jumped at me, but I dodged it! Then I ran down stairs. She yelled,"Don't leave, the party is about to start." Then, out of no where, younger and older kids in costumes started to come in and dance.  That's when I remembered the Halloween party the White's were throwing. I had shown up thirty minutes early.


 Halloween/October post

     The black cat twitched its tail twice. It hissed. Then all of the sudden a witch came from around the corner and scooped up the cat and flew away. Ever since I knew it would be a crazy Halloween night. When I walked past the old white mansion I saw a figure in the window it looked liked the person was petting a cat and the person had a weird hat. When I got home after trick treating I had a lot of candy but all I could think about was that mysterious figure. So I decided that I should go and check it out. When I got to the old white mansion the lights were on, but they haven't been on in ages. When I got to the door it was closed so I knocked the door opened. When I got inside I noticed two things that the house was covered in spider webs and that light was glowing from upstairs making the room glow. When I went upstairs every single step creaked as I walked upstairs closer and closer to the top. When I reached the top I went into the room in the center of the room was the witch and she was bruin something in her could r'en. When I was walking in she was walking around her could r'en when she noticed she was putting a toads foot in her could r'en the she said,"Those how come here don't return boy so neither will you." She jumped at me but I dodged it then I ran down stairs she yelled"Don't leave the party ." Then out of now were younger and older kids and costumes started to dance . Right then I remembered the Halloween party the witches were putting on and that I had shown up thirty minutes early.






1 comment:

  1. Great Job! I really liked how it was a party. What would it look like if you added more figurative language

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