The Best Thanksgiving Food
The best Thanksgiving food is easily mashed potatoes. Mashed potatoes with is the best Thanksgiving food because it is really simple. Another reason mashed potatoes are the best thanksgiving food is because it is healthy. According to “Livestrong.com” article “Are Mashed Potatoes Healthy?” : ”Mashed potatoes are low in calories and contain a lot of vitamins, minerals, and nutrients.” Therefore, mashed potatoes are an easy and delicious food to make for your family at Thanksgiving.
The Best Thanksgiving Food (Revision)
The best Thanksgiving food is easily mashed potatoes. Mashed potatoes are the best Thanksgiving food because it is really simple. Another reason mashed potatoes are the best food because they taste amazing. The creaminess and the buttery taste beat every other food. One more reason mashed potatoes are the best thanksgiving food is because it is healthy. According to “Livestrong.com” article “Are Mashed Potatoes Healthy?” : ”Mashed potatoes are low in calories and contain a lot of vitamins, minerals, and nutrients.” The amount of vitamins and nutrients make them a great Thanksgiving food. Therefore, mashed potatoes are an easy and delicious food to make for your family at Thanksgiving.
your description and imagery are great but maybe you should read over grammar and make your cites more explanatory
ReplyDeletegreat writing! I liked how you started off by explaining your opinion, and then backing it up with your evidence. How would it look with a little more description?
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ReplyDeleteGood job, Merick! I did not know that mashed potatoes had minerals and vitamins in them. Great quote!! What if you took out one of the reasons and added another quote?? Awesome work.
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ReplyDeletethat was a great post! how would it look if you added more detail after your quote? but other than that it was awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteNice job! You had a lot of evidence supporting your claim! What would your paragraph look like if you added more detailed words?
ReplyDeleteWow! What if you used some figurative language. Otherwise great work!
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