Saturday, November 7, 2015
Thanksgiving Food (revised)
There are so many mouthwatering and delicious foods at Thanksgiving. One of the most craved and wanted dish is stuffing. According to "Mr. Food" it says; "Stuffing is the number one must have dish at Thanksgiving." We don't actually know when stuffing was first used, but it has become a very favored Thanksgiving dish. Stuffing usually consists of bread, croutons, onion, celery, and seasoning. Turkey often has stuffing in it that makes it taste delectable. Many people make stuffing in various ways, but they usually taste similar. Even though the turkey is most thought of when Thanksgiving comes around, stuffing is the most crowd-pleasing dish.
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Nice!! I feel like eating some stuffing now, your writing was so good. What would it sound like if you added a question. Maybe like, "Have you ever had stuffing on Thanksgiving?"... :) :) :)
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ReplyDeleteAgreed! Stuffing is the best!!! Now I've just got to figure out a way to make it gluten-free:) The only thing I'd add is a little more about the website. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good! Though I don't like stuffing, your making it sound wonderful! Have you tried maybe making the conclusion more persuasive?
ReplyDeleteI liked your paragraph. I think that you did well. Maybe it would sound better if it was a little more persuasive. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteI loved your paragraph! Stuffing is also one of my favorites also. I liked how you put in some of the things that were in stuffing. I never knew that there were other things other than bread, vegetables, and seasoning... Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI myself rarely have stuffed turkey but with your unique description of the meal it makes my mouth water; although I wonder how it might of sounded if you didn't repeat yourself when trying to convince us.
ReplyDeleteI myself rarely have stuffed turkey but with your unique description of the meal it makes my mouth water; although I wonder how it might of sounded if you didn't repeat yourself when trying to convince us.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jonah and Taran, although this was a good paragraph with an interesting description of stuffing, I wonder how much better it could be with more persuasion. Not repeating yourself and adding different good details might make it a little more persuasive. I like how you described some of the ingrediates, it really made me hungry! Keep writing because you're great at it!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jonah and Taran, although this was a good paragraph with an interesting description of stuffing, I wonder how much better it could be with more persuasion. Not repeating yourself and adding different good details might make it a little more persuasive. I like how you described some of the ingrediates, it really made me hungry! Keep writing because you're great at it!
ReplyDeleteI agree turkey is better in stuffing and stuffing is good by it's self.
ReplyDeleteMatt, please double-check instructions on how to comment and revise. Thanks!
DeleteI agree turkey is better in stuffing and stuffing is good by it's self.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! What would it look like if you used a little more description? :)
ReplyDeletegreat article.what would your writing look like if you added a space after the period?
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