Turkey is the Best Thanksgiving Food
Turkey is the best Thanksgiving food. Its traditional, it tastes good, and it is easy to get this time of year. Almost every grocery store has turkeys in November. Also, according to a poll done by Gallup.com last November, 49% of Americans who entered, said that turkey was the greatest. The second place the stuffing or dressing category, with 14%. In conclusion, the best Thanksgiving food is turkey, because of flavor, accessibility, and tradition.
I really enjoyed your use of information, and how you enabled the info to flow through the whole paragraph. How would it look if you added more description?
ReplyDeleteNice job! I really like turkey too! What would it look like if you added a little bit more detail about how you think it tastes or about how you cook your turkey!
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ReplyDeleteYou did a great job I like how you stated you'r source, but the sentence about dressing, and stuffing is unnecessary you could have put in some more details on about how turkey is better. Over all you did an amazing job keep up the good writing.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the choice of words you used. Your paragraph was neatly written as well. What would it look like if you added more to your paragraph?
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job I like how you stated you'r source, but the sentence about dressing, and stuffing is unnecessary you could have put in some more details on about how turkey is better. Over all you did an amazing job keep up the good writing.
ReplyDeleteNice job! I liked how you talked about how easy it is to get turkey at around this time of the year. I especially liked how you said it is traditional. One thing you could do to make it better would be to put quotation marks around your quote. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWay to go! Good writing Kasen. I liked that it was factual and concise. I'd add more transition words to make the flow easier. Well done;)
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