turkey is the best
Turkey is the Best Thanksgiving Food
The best Thanks Giving food is turkey because it's so juicy. Another reason is because it's a traditional meal. According to the new York times artical "is turkey good for you" It states " All of the bird lovers applauded turkey’s lean, filling protein. It packs the entire spectrum of B vitamins, in addition to selenium and potassium." The reason the Thanks Giving turkey is so important is because it's the main meal of every Thanks Giving dinner. There fore getting the most attention and is the best food at the dinner table.
I liked your use of detail and evidence! You used the citation really well. I wonder what your writing would look like with better capitalization?
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ReplyDeleteGreat use of evidence Matt! As you revise, you've got to be more careful with spelling and punctuation (Thanksgiving), etc. Remember to use spell-check and have someone edit your writing until it becomes easier--I'm happy to help too:)
ReplyDeleteGood job! I really liked your citation. What would it look like if you used more detail?
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