A World Full of Love
What if we lived in a world that was full of peace and love? Think about it for a second. How would you feel if everything as we know it changed? Honestly, it would be extremely weird to me at first but then I would adapt to it.
If the world was full of love then there wouldn't be as many or possibly no wars or battles at all. We could just talk out our arguments instead of physically fighting about them. These might seem life changing because this would save the world all together. But, even if the ending of wars doesn't happen for a while, then that's okay. If we all just did the smallest things, like smiling at someone instead of glaring at someone you dislike, you could be helping the world onto its path to peacefulness. Small acts of peace or love can help so much more than you think.
Also, as Breanna said, if people loved each other as much as they loved themselves, it would be an amazing world to live in. I agree. So many people can be narcissistic. If those people gave up some of that self-posed love, they could help others.
Next time you want to glare at someone, or decide to pick a fight with a teacher or peer, just stop, and think about how if you didn't do that, you could help the world just that much more.
I like how you said that is would be weird at first but then be able to adapt to it. I wonder how it would look if you indented at the begining
ReplyDeleteNice job! I really liked how you talked about peace along with love. What would it look like if you indented at the beginning of your paragraphs?
ReplyDeleteI love the shout-out to Breanna and how you turned it back on the reader at the end. Just overall fantastic writing! As you revise, add more detail. Great work, thanks!
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