In my personal opinion, if people loved themselves like they did other people, it would be like we were in a non-evil world. If this happened we wouldn’t have to worry about people being rude to other people. We wouldn’t even have to worry about terrorists, wars, or contentions with other countries. That would be really nice, especially because of how the world is today. Our families and communities would be changed because we would be connected more. Also, we would not need to lock everything valuable up so they will not get stolen. This is what I think the world would be like if everyone loved each other like they did themselves.
Great job! I liked how you descried how our families and communities would change. What would it look like if you switched around the beginning, meaning instead of saying "if people loved themselves like they did other people", say, if people loved other people as much as they loved themselves. Really great job though!
ReplyDeleteI really liked some specific examples of how it would change the world. Well done! As you revise, add more descriptive language. Great work, thanks!
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