Loving Everyone
What do you think the world would be like if everyone loved each other as much as they do themselves?What if people focused on helping other people more then making sure their own life is great?Our world would be a much better and safer place if everyone loved everyone the same.
If everyone loved each other the same there would be not nearly as much problems as we have today.Also, there would be no more people being killed, no body would be fighting with friends or family, and there would be hardly any crimes.Also, the news channels wouldn’t have a lot of crime to report on. Poverty would only be seen in countries that have a low income rate.There would not be bullying anymore either which would be huge because kids these days are almost always experiencing bullying.Our world would be a much better place if everyone loved each other the same.
In conclusion, our world would be much safer and better if everyone loved each other the same.If you don't love people enough now, they might not be there in the future when you might need them.So if you want people to be there for you, you might want to start loving them as much as you love yourself.
Good job Carston. I think that something easy that you could do to improve it would be to add spaces after periods.
ReplyDeleteGreat start! You have some solid ideas and answer the prompt well. As you revise, fix those formatting and grammar issues and be less repetitive: more description;)
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