Sunday, February 28, 2016

Let’s see, what if everyone in the world loved each other as much as they loved themselves? What if everyone looked at other people's problems instead of only think about themselves? We would simply live in a better place.
If everyone loved each other as much as they loved themselves, walls would only have to be used to keep animals in or out. Guns would be very rare. The news channels wouldn’t have a lot of crime to report on. Poverty would only be seen in countries that have a low income rate. Our president could focus on the people's problems, and that would provide a very proficient system. Bullying would have a different meaning, it would probably mean  being mean to a bull.
So, if every soul in the world loved every other soul equally, we would live in a much better place. Do you love everyone as much as you love yourself? If you don’t, start now. You're never to cool to love everybody.

3 comments:

  1. Great job!I really like your word choice!What would it look like if you used a little more description?

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  3. Really unique writing--I enjoyed it. You answered the question well and it sounded like you. As you revise, I'd agree with Carston and suggest more description to illuminate your ideas. Good work, thanks!

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