What if everyone in the world loved people around them as much as they loved themselves? We would have a very different world if that is how it would be. We wouldn't have bullying issues, and we wouldn't have mean comments on social media. It would be a different world to live in because everyone would be kind to each other. If you're siblings fight now, they wouldn't if everyone loved each other. Families would be happy together, and everyone would get along. There would be perfect harmony through out the whole family. There wouldn't be any family drama in extended family, and even in your neighborhood, everyone would care about everyone else. In your communities, everyone would love to help out in community projects to serve others. Having a world where everyone loved people around them as much as they loved themselves would be perfect!
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
February: Loving Everyone! By: Emily Robins!
What if everyone in the world loved people around them as much as they loved themselves? We would have a very different world if that is how it would be. We wouldn't have bullying issues, and we wouldn't have mean comments on social media. It would be a different world to live in because everyone would be kind to each other. If you're siblings fight now, they wouldn't if everyone loved each other. Families would be happy together, and everyone would get along. There would be perfect harmony through out the whole family. There wouldn't be any family drama in extended family, and even in your neighborhood, everyone would care about everyone else. In your communities, everyone would love to help out in community projects to serve others. Having a world where everyone loved people around them as much as they loved themselves would be perfect!
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That's a very good way to look at that it shows just how much change would happen with such an amazing thing. What would it look like though with more real,life examples?
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you talked about what a change it would be. Good job. However, what would it look like if you had more examples about what it could do to people outside of their home or not on social media?
ReplyDeleteGreat job!I like the description.What would it look like with a little more examples?Great job overall.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I like the use of words. What if you used some smiley face tricks. Good job with everything.
ReplyDeleteIt would be a wonderful world if we had that kind of love! Great writing:) To improve, you might want to add examples and figurative language. Good job
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