Monday, February 29, 2016

If everyone loved everyone else as much as they loved themselves there would be no crime, or murderers.  The world would be an extremely safe place.  There would be no ISIS or other terror groups.  Imagine a world with everyone enjoying each others company, without getting jealous or hateful.  This would be amazing.  Homeless people would be a thing of the past.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 29, 2016 at 12:33 PM

    Good job Spencer. You answered the question really well. What do you think it would look like if you added more detail and made it a little bit longer.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 29, 2016 at 4:34 PM

    Great job Spencer. I wonder what it would look like if you included more compound and complex sentences.

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  4. Rachel RobinsMarch 12, 2016 at 8:13 PM

    Random note: the meme for your profile is hilarious. Good start on your writing. You have some good ideas. Your writing is a little disjointed and needs more organization and description. I have the feeling you might have done this quickly. Take a little more time:) Thanks!

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