In today's society, it is sad to see the amount of bullying and hate-filled comments some people make to one another. Sometimes comments are made that unintentionally hurt another person, and other times, people will purposely put one another down. Imagine how much better our world would be if everyone treated each other the way they felt about themselves. There would be very few arguments or wars, and our world would be filled with love. Our world would be much more happy, and we wouldn't put others down the way we do today. The world would be a much better place.
Families would be happier in this world. There would be fewer arguments among family members. Friendships would also be very different, because everyone would likely have a lot more friends than they do today. We would all be kind to each other, and work together to get things done. Our world would be filled with love rather than hate.
Good job Anika! You did awesome. I loved how you showed the problem first to introduce it. Next time how about trying a little bit more variety in your word choices.
ReplyDeleteGood job Anika! You did awesome. I loved how you showed the problem first to introduce it. Next time how about trying a little bit more variety in your word choices.
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing! You answered the prompt well and did a fantastic job. I'd agree with Shaylee and recommend a greater variety of word choices. Good work, thanks!
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